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PostPosted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 5:48 pm 
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Hi!

The people in the league of zeroes have decided it is time to do something for the Twilight Heroes community.
In this contest you will be writing a story about Twillight heroes. You can write whatever you want as long as it is Twilight heroes related.

We will be giving out some neat prizes for the best 3 stories.

#1 A gold star.
#2 5 silver stars.
#3 3 silver stars.

Now here are some of the rules.

- The stories submitted should fit into one post.
- Only one story per person may be submitted.
- Your story must be Th related.
- The stories also should also be submitted to: leaguezeroes@gmail.com
- Keep it cool, follow the forum rules!

This contest will be judged by league of zeroes members: Strlikecrazy, Mischal, Zaphod, cromulentia and Hodag

The criteria we are judging are:

Originality 1-10
Quality of entry 1-10
Humor 1-10

Deadline: last day of march

And that about raps it up. Have fun writing your stories.
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The league of zeroes is a great community and currently the biggest guild of Twilight Heroes. Were always trying to help eachother and new people to Twilight heroes. We would love for you to join us.
Check us out and apply at:

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Does it have to be humorous? I can do funny, but only in a very specific style, and that style wouldn't suit this story. I'd rather do something serious.

Also, is there a deadline?

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Humour would be nice, since this is somewhat of a parody game. But any type of humour is good. Sarcasm fits in great with a serious story I think.

deadline is updated in first post.


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So it /does/ have to have humor?

I'm probably out, then. Oh well. Nice contest, though.

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From what I see in the rules, if you have really good "Originality" and "Quality of entry", you would be able to beat out somebody with even the best humor out there.
Unless they're lying to us. Punks.

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Once upon a time there was a hero. He was like most of the other heroes in the city of Twilight except he didn't have a cape. He asked numerous times where he could aquire such an amazing item. Every time he asked he would get the same answer, "You had to donate money and get it a few months back." The hero had no clue what anyone meant. He had never heard of this money stuff. All he had were stupid chips. He went out in search for this so called "money". He looked everywhere from the nearby slums to the porcelain bay. He even went through the long process of building a jetpack just so that he could fly over the city of Twilight and see if he could spot any. In the end our hero never aquired a cape. He had to settle for a pouch of many lost things and a virtual reality helmet.


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I'm sure we can work something out.

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nvm


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A Day in the Life of a Superhero

It was dusk in Twilight city, a time of day when the town jumps to life, people can be seen bustling around until very late at night, and some of them with nefarious intent. A dark figure stood in front of a vast computer, surveying the city. his cloak pulled tight over his face to obscure his features, he turned and strapped on a jet pack built, at great expense, to quickly cover long distances. He fumbled for a minute with his amulet, tucking it down the front of his armor. It was his ace in the hole.

He surpressed a shudder. Would tonight be different? One never knew when turmoil would arise, and certainly not in Twilight City. Every day was a parade of evil, there only to be stopped by avengers like him, like The Druid.

Most days it was ordinary criminals, gang-bangers, mafia thugs and the like, but the shadows of this city have been known to hide some strange and bizarre things. Robots, Demons, Cultists, and even monsters from the sewers, led by the likes of Captain Buzzkill, The Mind Bender, The Bard, The Mick...

The Mick...

The Druid seethed with impotent rage. The Mick had caused so much terror... would he ever be stopped? The Druid had put a stop to some of his henchmen, but the mastermind remained at large.

The Druid stepped out of the garage concealing his secret lair, and took to the skies. First, he would patrol Downtown from the air, to see if he could spot any major action. Then, a quick sweep of the hotspots, call Susan Novak to see if the robots had returned to the Space Station, and then off to the desert outside the city, where ancient evils bubble up from beneath the sands.

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He patrolled the skies for about an hour, searching for any sign of trouble. He'd heard about some insane flying rodent up here that some other heroes had gone up against, but no sign of it so far. With everything clear, he dropped down to the rooftop to call Susan Novak.

He pulled out a cellphone and dialed her number.

"Hello?"

"Susan? Druid. Any news on the Station?"

"Oh, Druid, Hi. No, there's no news up there. The robots don't seem to have returned yet. But thanks again for helping get rid of them. I'll let you know if they come back."

"Good. I'm eager to get to the bottom of that."

"Yes, I know."

The Druid cleared his throat. When he first saw Dr. Novak, she'd made his heart jump. He wanted to ask her more, about herself... maybe ask her for a date. The feelings he felt for her, of longing, of... love? were too strong.

"Druid?"

"Yes, dr. Novak?"

"You don't have to keep calling me every night. I'll be sure to call you if the robots come back."

"Oh, uh, I..., er..."

"I have your number. Thanks for calling." As she hung up, he was sure he could hear her addressing someone in the room with her, saying "Now, where were we, Dogbonius?"

Dogbonius? Dogbonius!

He was in the same superhero group, the cleverly-named League of Zeroes!

The League of Zeroes - ith a name like that, we were being constantly underestimated by our enemies, which lead to our success, more often than not. Together we had beaten back Captain Buzzkill and his forces in St. Anne Park, and the robot incursion on the Space Station. He should've known that Dogbonius would have had contact with Dr. Novak.

He sighed a sigh of defeat. Beaten to the punch by one of those Elementalists.

Dammit.

Well, he decided to go beat back some of the rising evil at the Fiendish Pit.


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He landed at the edge of a huge pit with a swirling vortex in the center. He'd seen this before. The vortex becomes visible jsut before a demon comes through. He steeled himself for whatever he would face.

He saw a number of other heroes, all standing around the edges of the pit, tensed, waiting. Suddenly, a cacophany arose as a horde of demonic creatures burst out of the vortex. He launched himself into the fray, and witnessed the vortex behind him disappear, only to recharge.

The demon he'd chosen was enormous, some great tentacled fanged thing, and he intoned the chant on his amulet to give him strength, and charged the beast, head lowered, like an angry Bull. He felt his limbs surge with energy from the strange amulet just before he collided with the fiend, which swatted him back.

He landed on his back in the sand.

It was not too long ago that he was just an ordinary man, beaten down and humbled by life. his car stolen, his job on tenterhooks, and finally, mugged on the subway. When he'd come home to find his apartment looted, it was the last straw. That was the fateful night that he'd found his amulet, the one which charged him full of nature's raw power.

He sat up in the sand in time to see the fiend bearing down on him, slavering mouth full of glistening yellow teeth open to make a meal of him.

He rolled out of the way and slid down the sand further into the pit. He got to his feet just as the fiend turned to swipe at him, and charged it once again, with the fury of a Rhinocerous. the fiend sidestepped him, and a heavy tentacle blow landed on his back, knocking him back down to the sand.

Winded, he lay there for a moment, certain those fell teeth would close on him, and sever his spinal cord, killing him.

Somehow, strangely, he pulled his arms underneath him and pulled himself up. He looked up, squinting from the sand stinging his eyes, to see someone attacking the Demon, distracting it. He staggered to his feet, and tried to wipe the sand from his eyes, to get a better look.

His eyes, still blurry, saw his mystery benefactor land a solid punch on the creature, actually staggering it. Then, while the creature was off-balance, His benefactor raised an arm to the sky, and a piller of fire descended on the fiend.

The fiend howled in rage and pain, and disappeared. He looked up at the hero who'd rescued him. As his eyes cleared, he could see him.

"Dogbonius."

"Hey Druid. You look a little worse for wear. maybe you should get some rest?"

Dogbonius. Damn him. He decided he wasn't going to let this smug elementalist get the best of him.

"I'll rest when I'm dead." He said, and slid further down into the pit to confront the next wave of evil.

Behind him, he heard Dogbonius mutter "Suit yourself."

Suddenly, the vortex exploded again, regurgitating another horde of demons into the world. Druid steeled himself, and then looked up to see the largest thing he'd ever seen walk on land right in front of him.

Behind him, he heard Dogbonius yell "You hit 'im low, I'll hit 'im high!" and then he saw Dogbonius plow into the creature's neck at high speed.

"I don't need your help!" Druid shouted, as he charged the thing, summoning his Rhino strength. The creature staggered under the twin blows, nearly stepping on Druid, but he tucked and rolled out from under the footfall.

He was repositioning himself when the creature's tail... or tentacle... thing knocked into his chest and sent him flying backwards.

As he landed, he felt a crack in his ribcage and inhaled fire.

Broken rib, he thought, and struggled back to his feet. He intoned to his amulet and charged again, impacting with all the strength he could muster, swinging with his mourning star. He felt the creature's bones snap under the assault, and dove for cover as the creature tumbled to the ground.

It lay there unmoving. Druid climbed up out of the pit, satisfied. He'd need to tape his ribs and get some rest before fighting any more evil. Steeling himself for the pain, he activated his jetpack. The sudden upward jerk of takeoff nearly made him vomit from pain, but he persevered, and flew off to his secret hideout.


***

Dogbonius stood with another hero at the edge of the pit, as Druid rocketed away. The other hero looked at Dogbonius.

"You gonna tell him that behemoth was dead before he hit it?"

Dogbonius shrugged. "Nah. Guy looked like he needed a win"

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Once apon a night, some hero said, hey, I like cheese, and then 3000 jetpacks and Ultimate Aviator goggles fell out of the sky, then the Mick reveals his true name... Jick
"What the?" he exclaims,
"If you let me win, I will give you 3000 Mr. A's,"
"If I beat you, i'll own kol!"
After a long hard battle, I I mean the hero wins, and claims ownership of kol
The End.


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Location: Where I could swear I left the universe last...
Long ago, in what would years later be called Earth, on the very spot that would one day be called "Twilight," there existed a mountain. And on the side of the mountain, an ancient tribe of people existed. These people, known as the Haboodorei, believed the mountain to be the center of the universe, and worshiped it like a god. So every full moon, they would, as any good ancient tribe of people does, sacrifice their strongest tribesman (or tribeswoman, of course) to the mountain. So 6 days before the full moon, the festivities would begin. All of the inhabitants of the village would gather together, playing games, feasting, and having a wonderful time. But the main event was the contests. All of the strongest would compete in a series of challenges that would determine the one who would have the honor of being sacrificed to their volcano god, the greatest honor of all. A man named Steve, a humble potter, joined the ceremony. He won 9 of the 10 challenges (he never was one for Parcheesi) with seemingly supernatural strength and agility. So it was decided, he would be the one thrown into the lava at the apex of the full moon. The night approached, and Steve couldn't be happier, as he knew that second his flesh touched that lava he would be transported to heaven, where he would enjoy himself for the rest of eternity. So, at midnight, Steve jumped into the volcano. Down he went, falling, falling falling. And then, nothing.

Then he opened his eyes. Everything was white. And he was ecstatic. He tried to jump to his feet from the fluffy bed that he assumed was made of clouds. But something was wrong. He couldn't. The second he attempted to move his entire body was devoured with pain. What was going on? There should be no pain in heaven... He screamed, as it hurt more than anything he had ever experienced. Then two.... creatures came in. Their bodies were all white, and where their mouths should be was some kind of white shield. Their fingers were smooth, and simply looking at them Steve could tell their touch would be cold as ice. And again, he blacked out. And there was nothing.

Steve had been in a hospital. In the year 2008. When he had fallen in that lava, something happened. It hardened around him, fossilizing his dormant body. Because there had always been something special about Steve. And now, empowered with the power of a volcano, there was nothing that could stop him.

Steve's first year in our modern earth was a reign of terror. The smell of sulfur was always in the air as he wreaked havoc, trying to understand what had happened. But one day he met a man. A man who, inexplicably, new everything about him. More than Steve himself did. And that, is when Steve turned to good. He began using his Elemental power to help instead of hurt. And one day, while fighting a villain known as The Bard, he died of a massive heart attack.

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I sent my story to your mail :)


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We've had some great entries so far. Keep ehm comin'.


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OOC: I may add more to this later, but this story stands on it's own, so here it is.

"Whom the gods would destroy, they first call 'promising'."

"Jack," A voice above him softly said. It was a voice that denoted kindness. Jack knew the voice lied, it always lied. Jack's eyes slowly opened, and he looked at the man standing above him. The doctor wore glasses, a lab coat, and carried the obligatory clipboard, but where was he keeping the shiny needle?

"Jack, I thought we were making actual progress over the last few weeks. We both know you aren't a bad person. Misdirected, but not bad. Dr. Kepler didn't deserve what you did to him. You didn't deserve what your father did to you either," Jack struggled against the straitjacket at the mention of his father. When he was a free man, he'd cut a swath of death and destruction across Twilight over hearing that man's name. Now, the drugs kept him weak, almost docile. He still struggled against the invisible chains.

"I think you're right. I learned something, Dr. Peterson," Jack said, composing himself.

"What did you learn Jack?" The doctor said, leaning in.

"If you're trying to escape, steal his clothes, not his skin," Jack leaned back and let out a bombastic laugh that, not for the padded walls, would've echoed through the empty hallways of Shiloh Sanitarium.

Dr. Peterson stood straight again and smiled, "I really think we can save you, I've spent a year trying. My boss wants me to give up. I don't want to give up on you, I think the company will still find use for you,"

Jack's face contorted for a moment, when suddenly his face turned cheery, a grin appeared stretching from ear to ear, "I want you to understand something Doctor. I'm going to kill you. It's not going to be slow like the families I killed, you're going to be alive one moment and dead the next. And in that last agonizing second before you die, remember this: Your family is next. Darkness cannot drive out darkness, Doctor, only light can do that,"

"Progress, can be slow Jack, but we'll talk more tomorrow. I'm going to give you your shot now. Stay calm." the Doctor reached into his pocket and pulled out a long syringe. He kneeled down and grabbed Jack's arm.

Jack ripped through his straitjacket and smacked the Doctor against the padded wall. He fell face first onto the floor as Jack came down on his back, wrapping his arms around the Doctor's neck.

"WAIT," Came a cry as Jack twisted the Doctor's head a full one hundred and eighty degrees making what Jack thought was a satisfying *scrick*.

"No, I think that's enough for today," Jack said softly, almost kindly.

He undressed himself and he removed the Doctor's lab coat. He put his ripped straitjacket on the doctor. He reached down and grabbed the clipboard before opening the door of his cell. He walked down the empty halls and out the front door.

He walked in the spotlights of the main yard towards the fence gate. Standing on either side were two guards, wearing brown shirts, badges and a gun on their hip. Jack walked past them and reached for the door.

A hand landed on his shoulder, "I'm going to need to see some ID," one of the guards said. Jack spun around and grabbed the man's arm. He screamed as Jack ripped it from it's socket, and Jack turned to bash the other guard with the arm. The guard fell unconscious under the blow, but the man who's arm he now carried grabbed his gun and shot Jack in the back three times.

Jack sighed before turning around and beating the man with his own arm. He stopped beating him and threw the arm down after he stopped screaming. He walked over to the other guard and stomped his head into the ground. He reached down and grabbed a keycard from his twitching body, and turned back to the door. The card slipped in effortlessly, and the door opened. A few moments later he was a free man.

"Looks like I've got some time to kill," he said gleefully to himself.


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I did a bit of editing. I think it's done for now. Also, Ugh?


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You want a story told, in the realm of TH? Can. Will.

Here goes...

"My name... my name is as my skill. I am he who is neither hero nor villain. Neither good nor evil. I am Requiem. All those who strive for good and evil... they are in the wrong. One cannot succeed. For if only one exists, then it will fall. You cannot have the shadow without the light. I carry both roles. Dark, Light. Day, Night. Ballad, Dirge. I am he who uses the power of the mind, channeled through my instrument. There are those who think sound is good only for listening to. They're dead wrong..."

Night falls in the city. I leave my home, my citadel. The Cube is no longer as it once was. I won't return... Bard is no longer my ally. He has been converted to the side of evil. If one must change paths, the path of evil should be avoided... but Bard did not believe this. I cannot be the one to slay him. He was my brother in arms once... I cannot forget that. I need to clear my head... the JitterSpout should be good for that. I go there often, though this time it'll be as a customer, not the pianist.

~An hour later~

Disaster.

This.. this I cannot let pass. I can take him switching. I can take him falling into the darkness. I can even take him levelling that warehouse.

BUT PUTTING SALT IN MY COFFEE IS GOING TO FAR!! Oh ye Bard, ye who have fallen... for you, I shall take the path of good. I will stray from he balance. Because you put salt. In my coffee. SALT. In my COFFEE. For this... YOU SHALL PAY!!

~Two hours later~

"Victory... is mine. You shall pay for your misdeeds, Bard. You shall pay..." "No! Don't kill me!" I smirk. "No, bard. I won't kill you." His eyes widen in terror. "Not that! ANYTHING but that!" He knows. "I'll do anything! ANYTHING! Please, not that! No! No! NOOOOOO~" But it's too late... a flare in my eyes, a haunting tune from my ocarina, and it is done. He is... no more.

The ultimate punishment.

Having THAT song stuck in your head for all eternity.

I walk off into the darkness, quietly singing the tune just to tease him...

o/` This is the song that never ends o/`
o/` Oh it goes on and on my friends o/`
o/` Some people started singing it not knowing what it was o/`
o/` And now they just go on and on and on beeecause o/`


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I sat in the coffee shop that evening, drinking my final latte of the day. Another one, I knew, would cause me to get twitchy and start acting weird. Nobody wants that. The door opened to allow entry of yet another customer. I remember this one well, he was wearing a bowler hat, a large grayish coat, and what appeared to be a false moustache. Could have been real I suppose, it was hard to tell. What marked him most was that he sat down across from me. And he smiled.

"I've heard about you" he said.

"Oh?"

He stared at me a few seconds more, then set down a small object on the table. I couldn't tell what it was. Both hands now free, he reached into a pocket and removed a deck of cards, which he began to shuffle slowly.

"Care for a game?" he asked.

"Sure".

He began dealing the cards. He was missing the pinky of his left hand, I noticed. He dealt us each seven cards.

"I've heard about you" he said. He picked up his cards.

"You already said that"

He stared at me again. "Have you got any fives?"

"No."

He looked out the window, and slowly raised his arm to point to something. I looked in the direction of the gesture. That's when he stabbed me.


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There are still a few more days for this contest to run, so if you still want to enter, get your stories in!

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He points out a cloud. "What's that one?"

Serena doesn't answer.

A raptor, maybe, he decides after a minute. Or a '66 Mustang. They're not so different, he thinks. Not from the cloud's point of view.

He drifts in and out, his hands pillowed behind his head, and he doesn't pay attention when the screaming starts. It's Twilight, and that's business, but he didn't come here for that.

When he comes up for air, Serena's gone and left him a present. It's still beating. Later, when he's talking to the disinterested police, they don't even ask about the blood on his hands. They let him go with only a cursory warning to stay in the city.

Why would he ever leave?

He checks his watch. It's quarter after six, time to go to work, and he hails his driver with a careless hand.

"We're late, Stephen," he says as he settles in.

"Don't worry about it, Mr. Ace," his driver says, adjusting the mirror. "I'll get you there in a jiff."

He grins. "I know you will."


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Thanks for all your entries. We will post the results and give out the prizes on friday.


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Thanks to everyone who posted a story, we really appreciate the effort. Unfortunately not everyone can be a winner but you can rest assured that all your stories provided some entertainment for the community. Thank you!

And now for the moment you have all been waiting for! *points to the drumroll that is Still going on in the background* I know I know... Consider it a figure of speech. Well with no further jabbering... The results!:

Thek3vin: 6.5

A decent story. We liked how it gave an explanation for where superheroes come from.

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Dorian Grey: 7.3


A nice dark story. I enjoyed it. A longer version would have been nice. I’m interested in what jack is up to.

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Xarth: 5.5

Hmm interesting? Decent story about evil coffeehouse gamblers. It did not cut it compaired to other entries we had. Sorry.

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Soleta: 6.3

Interesting dark story.

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Braiton: 6.0

A funny little story. But not enough compared with the others sorry.

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Drkirre: 7.8

Nice story we rated this story as the one with the best humor. 3rd prize is yours.

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Christopher morris: 8.5

We thought that this was a great story! Well put together andwell written. We’d really like to see a follow up. This story would have won if there was just a little more humour in it. 2nd prize for you.

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The druid. 8.7

We really enjoyed this story and it even made me laugh a couple of times. A part two would be greatly appreciated. A winner is you!

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EDIT-- Chistopher morris, who are you? I dont have your char name.


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Oh right, I emailed it as per the rules, forgot to include my user name... I ranked 8.4 and 7.5 with the same story, how'd that happen?

Edit: I emailed you again with my username and a copy of the story over again to ensure you knew it was me.


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Thanks dorian. The difference is because some judges just did the gmail stories and the others did the ones in the forum. Thus the avarege was different since I did not know you were the same person. Sorry about that.


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Oh and I've been working on that story further as well, if you're actually interested in reading what I have so far: http://www.twilightheroes.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=345.


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Thanks! I'll see about a part two!

And let me say that it was really cool to be able to read everyone else's stories in this thread as well.


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