Big honkin' hammerRyme wrote:Which item?
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I think that first "is" is supposed to be an "it".No weapon fumbles. Unless it's balanced by other effects which make you fumble. Or the effect is broken, which is most certainly is. So really, for now, you're gonna fumble until I fix it. No need to report this.
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The churches are empty / The priest has gone home / And we are left standing / Together alone
--October Project: "Dark Time"
--October Project: "Dark Time"
No, it shouldn't:Kon-Tiki wrote:Sanatarium should be sanitarium (too many occurances to list the specific ones)
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/Sanatarium
The others are good catches, though.
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Remember the rule, guys. Look it up at http://dictionary.com first. You'd be surprised how many words have multiple different minor spellings.
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"bat out of hell". Isn't Hell a place-name, and thus a proper noun, and thus something that should be capitalized?
Also, it seems the crib sheet should follow the standard of the Hero's Cape and be capitalized as well.
Also, it seems the crib sheet should follow the standard of the Hero's Cape and be capitalized as well.
The churches are empty / The priest has gone home / And we are left standing / Together alone
--October Project: "Dark Time"
--October Project: "Dark Time"
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Never noticed this before...
Personally, I think the second is better because it mirrors the first sentence.
Looks like you lost track of where you were going with this. It should either be "Unless you don't happen to consider..." or "...to be nothing special."cup of coffee wrote: This is a cup of regular caffeinated coffee. It's nothing special. Unless you happen to consider something that keeps you warm when you're cold, picks you up when you're down, and keeps you going in the face of adversity to be something special. In which case this might just be the most special thing on the planet.
Personally, I think the second is better because it mirrors the first sentence.
The churches are empty / The priest has gone home / And we are left standing / Together alone
--October Project: "Dark Time"
--October Project: "Dark Time"
I think the quote says what I wanted it to. Consider this example:Cristiona wrote:Never noticed this before...
Looks like you lost track of where you were going with this. It should either be "Unless you don't happen to consider..." or "...to be nothing special."
Personally, I think the second is better because it mirrors the first sentence.
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Godzilla isn't very tall. Unless you consider 200 feet to be tall. In which case Godzilla might be really tall after all.
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Hm. Okay, I see your point. Guess I just have a snarkier world view, heh.Ryme wrote:The coffee one is more subtle, which I think makes it funny in a way that the Godzilla line isn't, but it's the same thing.
The churches are empty / The priest has gone home / And we are left standing / Together alone
--October Project: "Dark Time"
--October Project: "Dark Time"
The problem with typos I make the first time is it means I also tend to overlook them the second, third, tenth, whatever time if you just copy and paste it here without highlighting the word. Totally a failing on my part, but it means I start pulling out my hair first until I catch on to the actual issue. Any help with the highlighting/explanations is always appreciated.
Fixed.
Fixed.
In a newer choice adventure, it says that you see 4 people, but then only specifically lists off 3 of them. Intentional?
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Well, I've got a hat!
Well, I've got a hat!
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Quest prompt for Dank and Rusty Maze:
We're not really sure what it is, but something seems to be spillng over into the sewers from some neighboring tunnels.
The churches are empty / The priest has gone home / And we are left standing / Together alone
--October Project: "Dark Time"
--October Project: "Dark Time"
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