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PostPosted: Thu Jun 19, 2014 9:19 pm 
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Sanjuro wrote:
It's also automatically started up the penultimate item in your queue. Because it's the future!
I actually meant "it's" as in "it has" there. I think I'm okay, but... its and it's :?

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 22, 2014 8:57 am 
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In computer lab when decrypting a disk:
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Note you won't make any progres on the decryption until Vlad's Decryptonomicon software is running.


Also, might want a : after note or change to "Note that".

Added s and that, for clarity. Thanks!


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PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2014 12:05 am 
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You fire the rocket high into the clear sky above Twilight. Clouds suddenly form, followed by a lightning bolt tracing the rocket\'s trail back to the English tourist for 120 damage.

When using agl rocket


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PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2014 12:07 am 
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You set off the loudest, shriekiest firework in the world. Your opponent can\'t seem to decide whether to punch you to make it stop or just lie down and accept the 55 damage sonic overload.

Robot Number 1 complains furiously until your opponent agrees to a costume change. It almost has to be less protective; fanservice (fan service?) and proper armor rarely go hand in hand.


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PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2014 12:08 am 
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You light the sparkler, festively jabbing the matarkhis for 42 damage and 42 damage. Then you spell your name out a few times in the sparks.

It\'s like an independence day rave and all the villains are invited!

Victory! You beat up your foe and win the combat!

Thanks! Removed all these slashes. Silly slashes.


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PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2014 12:26 am 
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Whoops, just noticed this one today. One of the deranged quester's miss messages:
The adventure has a hypothesis that, if he hits you hard enough, loot will pop out.

missing an R there

Typos pop out! Fixed, thanks!

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Curse you its and it's! Curse yoooooooooou!


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PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2014 8:09 pm 
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Attempting to use the Psychic Heckling opening against a robot:
Trying to heckel the servant robot is like arguing with your computer at work... momentarily satisfying but ultimately fruitless.
"heckle"

EDIT: To erfMortium, it appears that "fanservice" is correct:
http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Fanservice

Fixed, thanks! Also, I didn't notice if fanservice was marked upthread but I usually see it without the space now.

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Curse you its and it's! Curse yoooooooooou!


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PostPosted: Wed Jul 02, 2014 12:53 am 
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Using independent throwdown:

Combat!
You throw down the throwdown, dealing the hunter-killer drone 20 damage damage with its thunderous peal. Wow, they\'ve really improved these since you were a kid.



Slash!

Slashed the slash, thanks!


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PostPosted: Mon Jul 07, 2014 9:12 pm 
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Casting a spell with Chlorine Lad's ladel ladle:
You send out a pulse of mental anguish, dealing 24 damage to anything in the area.
The contents of Chlorine Lad's ladel put the worst institutional lunches to shame, dealing your opponent 3 damage.

Ladled out a fix.

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Curse you its and it's! Curse yoooooooooou!


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PostPosted: Sun Jul 13, 2014 11:03 pm 
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Here is one of the angry rioter's miss messages:
Your opponent attacks ... You wouldn't like me when I get angry," the rioter says.
"You're already angry," you point out.
"Huh, you're right." The guy takes a while to sort that out.

That first line looks like it's missing a quotation mark.

Quotationed!

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 17, 2014 8:50 pm 
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When using the independent throwdown, there is an extra "damage" after the sonic damage:
You throw down the throwdown, dealing the buzzing swarm 27 damage damage with its thunderous peal. Wow, they've really improved these since you were a kid.

Threwdown on some typos. Thanks!

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 19, 2014 1:36 am 
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Attacking while Seeing Double:
You attack ... you're stilling seeing double, so you decide to aim for the one on the right...

Stilled!

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 01, 2014 2:47 am 
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Virtual Lad's goggles:
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full of then-high tech doodads and wizzbang gimgrackery.


Should be gimcrackery.


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